第一段（基本信息段）：

My name is Liu Yating. Ya, in Chinese means elegant. Ting means  pleasant. Apparently, to be an elegant and pleasant lady is my  parents’ expectation for me. I come from Hunan Province, which is  located in southern part of China. I graduated from Hunan University, majoring in finance. I enjoy reading primarily because it can  cultivate my critical thinking, diversify my knowledge and enrich  my mind.

第二段：（重点信息段 学霸版）

I graduated from XX university, majored in XX. Recalling my four-year  college study, diligence and devotion are two key words. Seldom did I idle away the precious time. I get up at six O’clock every morning,  collect materials in the library every weekend, and read various kind  of books at vacations.

Academically, my GPA is 3.8 which ranks second in the grade. I  passed CET 6 at the score of 588, and I have won the First Level  Scholarship Reward for 3 consecutive years. Under the instruction  of my teacher, I published a paper at XX Journal last year, which  inspired the genuine academic passion in my heart. 

或 第二段：（重点信息段 未来学霸版）

I graduated from XX university, majored in XX. Recalling my four-year  college study, diligence and devotion are two key words. I seldom  idle away the precious time, get up at six O’clock every morning,  collect materials in the library every weekend, and read various  kinds of books at vacations. I remembered that in Professor Wu XX’s lecture 标题 , I was exposed to many academic definitions, such as  A and B, which gave me some inspiration to do my graduation paper.  Another Professor Li XX’s paper 标题 enlightened me on some  specific research in the past year, which inspired the genuine  academic passion in my heart.

第三段：（升华段）

I am a patient and diligent man/girl, because I know good things take  time and I believe if a person is not born to be intelligent, at  least you must make sure you are diligent. That is the key to your  further study in the future. I also believe the significance of  solitude, without it, a student can not go further in the academic  world.